First original song--Sometimes

Humble Monkey · Post by **Humble Monkey** » Mon Mar 15, 2004 1:55 am

This was the first song I wrote, a friend of mine, John, co-wrote the lyrics; we only spent 15 or 20 minutes on them & it shows; they're pretty damn cheesy

....I recorded the song about 3 1/2 years ago, from our PA straight to a CD, using an old-school portable Phillips CD burner--so we had to do it in one take, & w/ no editing. I think it turned it out pretty good though. I'd like to know what you guys think, & how it compares to the first song that you wrote.
Enjoy... 8)

http://www.angelfire.com/hero/humblemon ... etimes.mp3

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Mon Mar 15, 2004 2:55 am

i like that guitar part

kinda reminds me of that song...she fuckin hates me or whatever

this is a cool tune...i'm a sucker for ringing strings

Jc · Post by Jc » Mon Mar 15, 2004 4:30 am

Isn't that a fefe dobson song? heh heh

Anyways not bad.

Humble Monkey · Post by **Humble Monkey** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 2:10 pm

Matty Boom wrote:i like that guitar part

kinda reminds me of that song...she fuckin hates me or whatever

this is a cool tune...i'm a sucker for ringing strings

Thanks, I too have fondness for ringing strings

...it does have a similar chord progression to that She Fuckin Hates Me song....but I wrote my song first!!

....btw, who the hell is fefe dobson?

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 3:07 pm

she fuckin hates me! lol

very good though.

ElGuitarrista · Post by **ElGuitarrista** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 6:36 pm

I think the piece is good... it's catchy... I like the phrase "Sometimes I get crazy" the best.

Great confident vocals- though they get overpowered by the guitar throughout the song in this recording (just the levels). It was hard to make out the lyrics at points because the vocals were so dominated by the volume of the guitar.