please give these originals a listen

eclektik_rhythmz · Post by **eclektik_rhythmz** » Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:22 pm

hey fellow musicians,
I just posted a few tunes. so please check them out and post me a critique of what yall think.

its fixed! try this...http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 20&alid=-1

Cheers,
J.T.

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:31 pm

Bad link, hope to hear it soon

eclektik_rhythmz · Post by **eclektik_rhythmz** » Fri Feb 14, 2003 11:58 pm

ok try this...

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 20&alid=-1

juineaux · Post by **juineaux** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 12:54 am

Good job

Masquerade:
It has a dave matthews sorta sound, but folkier. A little bit of celtic in there, but just a little. I would love to hear some vocals or another guitar(or perhaps my little mando) anyways great stuff. I really really love great instrumentals(unfortunately I might be one of the only ones)

Far gone:
Has a little more of a acoustic pop sound. By "pop" i mean a good well put together song, not like Nsync or britney or anything like that. Great chorus and the vocals are pretty good. I would like to jam to this.

what are you using for recording?

Some of my music:
http://tomcadaret.iuma.com

eclektik_rhythmz · Post by **eclektik_rhythmz** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 1:34 am

thanks for the feedback as for my methods of recording i use a sony f-v320 into my sony mini-disc recorder then i upload then into my computer using cakewalk then in cakewalk i layer multiple tracks. JUST A NOTE...i also record the guitar and vocals together.

thanks again,
J.T.

johntherevelator · Post by **johntherevelator** » Sat Feb 15, 2003 2:51 am

excellent work

masquerade- definitely needs vocals, in my opinion
its a good foundation for a great song, but it needs something more to keep it interesting i think
add a lead part and vocals and it will sound even better!

far gone- u have a good ear resulting in a good voice
im trying to compare it to someones but i cant remember
very nice
again, a lead track would be good if youre able to, but both of these songs are very good and you have real potential