butterfly cover

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 5:50 pm

i really like this song, simple, but unique
so heres my try at it

http://www.angelfire.com/pa5/dave_fan_f ... terfly.mp3

any comments positive/negative would be great

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 7:09 pm

currently experiencing the joyous temp. susp. that is angelfire - please check back in an hour or two

souna · Post by **souna** » Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:58 am

nice brother. but you went off at a certain point other than that really good
peace

isaac · Post by **isaac** » Wed Feb 18, 2004 10:41 am

i agree with souna, you were off every now and then. i wish i had a better recording of butterfly to critique you on, but other then that, everything was spot on. the vocals were pretty good, but could use a little smoothing out, but that comes with practice and listening to yourself over and over to see where you can improve.

nice job, mate!

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Wed Feb 18, 2004 2:50 pm

yeah a few times since i made that i think i've done it better - thanks for the comments fellas