Original Song by the Tender

Bartender2424 · Post by **Bartender2424** » Sun Feb 15, 2004 5:45 pm

The renouned bassist has now released his first original guitar song. Enjoy this! Criticize.

http://www.angelfire.com/biz7/vday/ohno.wav

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Sun Feb 15, 2004 5:49 pm

i liked the breakdown bit around 2:00...but for most of the song the guitar was too heavy and it overshadowed the vocals so i can't say much about the vocals...and the guitar got a little repetitive...worth the listen though, thank you

Bartender2424 · Post by **Bartender2424** » Sun Feb 15, 2004 5:56 pm

Yea, thats why I play bass, but I thought Id just give ya a listen. As for the vocals and such. Its called having a 10$ mic

No cool edit pro either(on my moms computer, mine crashed) So next time I'll yell a little louder

Thanks

The 'Tender
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Bartender2424 · Post by **Bartender2424** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 10:26 am

Anymore opinions?

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Mon Feb 16, 2004 12:09 pm

you may want to wait a few days, some people don't come around this forum all the time

horsmar15 · Post by **horsmar15** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 2:12 am

I thought it was alright but too repetitive. As, for your voice I think you have potential, you just need to work on control a little.

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 3:26 am

Not bad at all , i enjoyed listening to this one , keep them coming

skpr41 · Post by **skpr41** » Tue Feb 17, 2004 1:32 pm

no comment that hasn't been made already.

overall i liked it.