good afternoon, attached is a cover of spoon. Any critque or comments are welcome and would also be helpful in helping me improve. Thanks,
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spoon cover, please critique
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Listening now. Guitar sounds good, nice job with that. Some of the phrasing in the vocals sounds a bit off, but nothing to serious.
Did you try going into a falsetto at the end of the chorus at all, with the "laughing out loud makes the pain subside" part?
Did you try going into a falsetto at the end of the chorus at all, with the "laughing out loud makes the pain subside" part?
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Re: spoon cover, please critique
Thanks for listening. I didn't try to go into a falsetto on th laughing out loud part< i think i got scared i might screw up the notes when i was recording. I will definately have to try and work on that. In reference to the vocal phrasing, do you have any tips on ways I could improve? Thanks again,