An original Say Goodbye

DmbSid · Post by **DmbSid** » Wed Jan 28, 2004 4:47 pm

Here is a song about a girl and all I have left to say about her...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/craigpagemusic.htm

If you listen please drop a line and tell me what you think

ec_costanzo · Post by **ec_costanzo** » Wed Jan 28, 2004 5:01 pm

WOW howd you come up with those lyrics???

ec_costanzo · Post by **ec_costanzo** » Wed Jan 28, 2004 5:02 pm

Whops Just now listening to it
By the title i thought you just covered say goodbye by dmb
hahhaha
My bad
After the song is over ill leave feedback
Good so far

DmbSid · Post by **DmbSid** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 12:15 am

Only 1 reply after 30 some views...Even if you dont like it say something...Thanks

2StepGranny · Post by **2StepGranny** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 2:19 am

Well done, I really enjoyed it. Can't really say anything bad about it. Great job.

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 6:15 am

DmbSid wrote:Only 1 reply after 30 some views...Even if you dont like it say something...Thanks

you might not get a lot of feedback if you're new and haven't been here critiquing other peoples' stuff...it's kind of an implied thing around here...so stick around and listen to some peoples' music!

DmbSid · Post by **DmbSid** » Thu Jan 29, 2004 4:16 pm

Thanks to all who listened and gave their opinion...Matty Boom-- Thanks for your advice...I think you are right and I will stick around.

AdamCU81 · Post by **AdamCU81** » Fri Jan 30, 2004 3:33 am

I like this. I think it could use a tempo change in there...between verse and chorus would make sense. This song would be even better with a rockin drum beat...a djembe or some other hand drum would work fine. Nice.

KleptoOne · Post by **KleptoOne** » Wed Feb 04, 2004 8:54 pm

I thought it was cool, although I think the song sounds a little too sweet at parts, especially the first time you say "take your hands off of me" given the lyrics I'd expect somthing a little more aggresive. But all in all good stuff man

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Wed Feb 04, 2004 9:43 pm

i liked the lyrics, the guitar seemed a little choppy, but the mood of the song totally fit with the lyrics, good job

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Sat Feb 07, 2004 4:37 am

Overall a very nice song , a little more aggression at certain places could be a good addition , but i liked listening

Good job , and like Matty said , stick around