My first attempt at posting a song...

DmbSid · Post by **DmbSid** » Sun Jan 25, 2004 8:25 pm

I'm new to the boards and I just posted a song to this site. The song is called The Answer...Please give it a listen and let me know what you think. I know the recording could be better but give it a listen anyway.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/craigpagemusic.htm

mastermindmatthews3436 · Sun Jan 25, 2004 8:29 pm

sounds familiar to me for some reason.....i like the intro progression....the rest of the song doesnt seem to flow thoough, cant really distinguish the chorus from the verse...you have a good voice though no cringing or anything, it fits the song really well....just work on this one a little more and liek you said work on the recording quality but overal it was good for a first recording post, hope to hear more fomr you man...peace

DmbSid · Post by **DmbSid** » Sun Jan 25, 2004 9:53 pm

Thanks for the advice...I dont know if you were ever in knoxville, Tn., but i played out there quit a bit...you might have heard it there.

If anyone esle takes a listen...please critique...it's the only way we get better...Thanks

AdamCU81 · Post by **AdamCU81** » Sun Jan 25, 2004 11:36 pm

I like the vocals and the guitar, and I'm sure its better when the quality is good. You have a great voice. The song seems to drag on a bit for my taste. Maybe try creating percussion with strumming to liven it up a bit.