Holy Crap, Two In One!!!!!!!!!

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Holy Crap, Two In One!!!!!!!!!

Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:01 pm

here you go yous guys....
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Unread post by johntherevelator » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:05 pm

check the link jason

it says theres something wrong with the url
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:17 pm

ok, they're fixed

lemme know what you think!!!!!!!!

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Unread post by johntherevelator » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:19 pm

k ill take a listen right now
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Unread post by ticohans » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:24 pm

jason make a mistake on a dave song??? NEVER!

seriously though, i don't know why you're trying to make excuses for yourself. the stone was good.

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Unread post by johntherevelator » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:25 pm

the stone-

damn near perfect
might want to edit those screw ups at the start to clean it up a little, and the first few times you played the chord in the verse section (31x3xx), it was a little off on the timing, but you corrected after 2 or 3 times, which is good.
great job though
damn near perfect
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Unread post by johntherevelator » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:31 pm

2 Step-

a little slow at the start, but you sped it up a little through the rest of the song, but there are still parts where it could be a little quicker

again, id really like to see you add lyrics to this song

much better job on this one than the first one

(im gonna feel stupid if its the same one, but i dont think it is)
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Unread post by johntherevelator » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:33 pm

WAIT!!
im listening to it again and i can sort of hear vocals!

louder jason, LOUDER!!
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:39 pm

LOL, John....I will do another cover of two step where I do sing...but as far now, anyone else???

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Unread post by johntherevelator » Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:41 pm

do it NOW!!! :lol: :wink: :D
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sun Feb 02, 2003 11:50 pm

yea
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Unread post by gravedigger » Sun Feb 02, 2003 11:58 pm

DmbFanJason wrote:nobody else???what the fuck!?

bla dee!
the site was on the disabled list for a few hours there. I'll download it now.

edit: can't listen to it, cause your site it'll be down for another 4 hours,
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Unread post by stln » Mon Feb 03, 2003 6:59 am

imo...the stone. you're good. I guess you've got the guitar-part pretty much down :)
You just need to work on your singing...no offense though...you seem to have the ear for it..just need to make your voice stronger...but I guess you knew that

anyway...nicely done!

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Unread post by johntherevelator » Mon Feb 03, 2003 12:54 pm

stln wrote:imo...the stone. you're good. I guess you've got the guitar-part pretty much down :)
You just need to work on your singing...no offense though...you seem to have the ear for it..just need to make your voice stronger...but I guess you knew that

anyway...nicely done!
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Unread post by gravedigger » Mon Feb 03, 2003 1:26 pm

johntherevelator wrote:
stln wrote:imo...the stone. you're good. I guess you've got the guitar-part pretty much down :)
You just need to work on your singing...no offense though...you seem to have the ear for it..just need to make your voice stronger...but I guess you knew that

anyway...nicely done!
whats imo?
in my opinion
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