and I am wondering if you could take a listen and please critique some songs, i havent asked anyone to listen yet, so you will be giving me the first honest opinion. thanks again. the link is below.
http://www.myspace.com/daveheibergermusic
thanks again!
-Dave
Hey Guys, im making a new demo...
Hey Guys, im making a new demo...
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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...
I think the guitar playing is pretty good. The vocals could be a little stronger. Overall you got some nice stuff, thanks for posting
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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...
hey, thanks for the input. thanks for listening!markTR wrote:I think the guitar playing is pretty good. The vocals could be a little stronger. Overall you got some nice stuff, thanks for posting
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Re: Hey Guys, im making a new demo...
YOU GOT TO FIND A WAY
Turn town the snare, up the mid & treble portions of the vocals so they come through more. This sounds like the type of song where the lyrics are more important than the vocal part itself.
On a whole not bad. I want more to happen, to be frank.
Let's Do It All Night, I like a lot, but the same problems with the vocal mix.
Turn town the snare, up the mid & treble portions of the vocals so they come through more. This sounds like the type of song where the lyrics are more important than the vocal part itself.
On a whole not bad. I want more to happen, to be frank.
Let's Do It All Night, I like a lot, but the same problems with the vocal mix.
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