A New cover

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A New cover

Unread post by michaelb14 » Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:17 am

Figured I'd put one of my dave attempts under the microscope. Here's my take on #41. My roomate is playing electric, the acoustic is me and the vocals are me. Lemme know what ya'll think.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=2358/singles
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Unread post by HiFiKing » Wed Jan 29, 2003 1:53 pm

The building intro was nice. The vox was buried beneath the accoustic. I'm not sure the slightly distorted guitar vamping the chords for the chorus at 1:30 sounded right. (Just my ear.) Some rough spots on the Vox, but overall a good take. A better mix could shine this up nicely.

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