Dont Drink The Water needs critiquing

dmb_rulz · Post by **dmb_rulz** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:23 pm

http://www.sendspace.com/file/rs9q75

Taylor614CE · Post by **Taylor614CE** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 7:11 pm

Hey.

Pro's:
Guitar seems real smooth.
You did a good job with the effects.

Con's:
Just to shoot you straight
you are off key...
voice doesn't match what your playing

dmb_rulz · Post by **dmb_rulz** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 7:37 pm

Thanks for the info. From listeing to it again i seem to be playing to fast for the vocals. I was playing and singing at the same time. Which is a weakness for me. Do the vocals sound ok just slow down the rythem??