one sweet world

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Sat Jan 03, 2004 2:03 pm

i've wanted to have singing in something i've posted, so here's my first shot - One Sweet World

the quality isn't great, and if the song sounds lower it is, for the sake of my singing i started 2 frets down

bash away if you'd like, all comments both positive and negative are welcomed

http://www.angelfire.com/pa5/dave_fan_for_life/

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Sat Jan 03, 2004 2:07 pm

this was a lot better than i thought it would be, good call on playing it Db because it allowed to sing on key, for the most part. you could have been a bit more rhythmic with your playing, it would have filled more space. good effort on this one, but there is always room for improvement

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Sat Jan 03, 2004 2:08 pm

double post craziness...

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Sat Jan 03, 2004 2:20 pm

i really like that...great job i thought...not really any comments fatjack hasn't made for you, but well done and keep working

DJR · Post by **DJR** » Sat Jan 03, 2004 7:29 pm

thanks for the comments guys, i agree theres room for improvement - i'm workin on some other stuff - thanks again