Short Intro

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Sat Jul 14, 2007 7:22 pm

This is a short intro to a song that ill have up in a week or so. Please tell me what you think.

http://www.yousendit.com/download/OGhlS ... RlkwTVE9PQ

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Thu Jul 19, 2007 3:34 pm

What the hell? Anyone...?

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Mon Jul 23, 2007 5:25 pm

Can anyone give some feedback?

AustinG · Post by **AustinG** » Tue Jul 24, 2007 6:09 am

re up bro, I think everyone is summer slackin.. I know I've been.

RunsWithBuffalo · Post by **RunsWithBuffalo** » Tue Jul 24, 2007 12:15 pm

I think the link is screwed up, ill keep trying though.

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 3:10 pm

ok here we go

http://www.yousendit.com/download/elNKO ... UjQwTVE9PQ

now tell me what u think lol

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Wed Jul 25, 2007 3:15 pm

I like that (a little too dave influenced, but i don't have doubts that you can produce better stuff). Post more, please.

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:10 pm

Thx for the feedback. Not sure how it sounds like dave, i dont think that i sound like him at all. Anymore thoughts, was I on key or were my vocals good?

SRVDMB · Post by **SRVDMB** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 5:17 pm

Wow! Thats really good. I don't think it sounds like dave that much. And even if it did, its good your influences come out in your music. When someone says: "I think its too dave influenced." They are a retard(especially if you are a musician) because your influences should be everywhere in your music. I like your voice. keep it up. If you have anything else you should post it somewhere.

Cheers,
Jack

P.S> What kind of guitar do you have?

Banjobach · Post by **Banjobach** » Thu Jul 26, 2007 6:07 pm

SRVDMB wrote:Wow! Thats really good. I don't think it sounds like dave that much.

I think what he meant was that the chords in the beginning are really similar to that of Grey Street (or at least thats how i see it). Its nice and relaxing though. Your voice is nice to listen to. Its not as rivetting as I usually prefer my music but its still quite listenable. Maybe vary the 3 string plucking to finger picking every now and then. I think you've got a good launch point here. Hopefully you can keep working with it and chizzel out a real nice song. As it stands, its got some good potential.

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 6:38 am

THx for the feedback

dmbguitar718 · Post by **dmbguitar718** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:54 am

SRVDMB wrote:When someone says: "I think its too dave influenced." They are a retard(especially if you are a musician) because your influences should be everywhere in your music.

*shrug*

philtheman · Post by **philtheman** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:19 am

I guess the dave resemblance shows in the chords im playing. Im basically playing "dave" chords: being what he uses in Grey Street, Tripping Billies, the jam for LIOG, I think Lover Lay Down, Too Much, JTR etc. except im using a capo on 3. However, dave did not make those chords up, he made them, for lack of a better word, popular. As far as my voice, it could have some dave influences but i couldnt tell you cuz when i hear my own voice its different then when a third party hears it and tell you what you sound like.

EnFuego · Post by **EnFuego** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 11:10 pm

You've got a great voice. I would like to hear more of your stuff. The guitar part did seem like you were playing grey street or tripping billies, etc with a different strumming pattern. You are right that Dave didn't invent those chords, but you are using them in a very similar progression to what he does in so many songs, so I agree with Pat that it sounds very Dave-ish in that regard.

Keep making your own stuff though, and posting it on here.

SRVDMB · Post by **SRVDMB** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:21 am

philtheman wrote:I guess the dave resemblance shows in the chords im playing. Im basically playing "dave" chords: being what he uses in Grey Street, Tripping Billies, the jam for LIOG, I think Lover Lay Down, Too Much, JTR etc. except im using a capo on 3. However, dave did not make those chords up, he made them, for lack of a better word, popular. As far as my voice, it could have some dave influences but i couldnt tell you cuz when i hear my own voice its different then when a third party hears it and tell you what you sound like.

I know exactly what you mean their. I sing and then i listen to it later and it sounds pretty different. I think thats the story for any singers.