Wonderwall - my first ever posted recording!

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 7:43 pm

Here's my first ever recording - so be gentle - it's Wonderwall by Oasis. I sang even though I have the flu

Thats dedication

Anyway, enjoy it, let me know if the link doesn't work....

http://www.angelfire.com/creep/spbmusic/wwall.mp3

rampaged.congt · Post by **rampaged.congt** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 8:34 pm

link doesn't work

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 8:41 pm

hmm, thats weird

try to go to http://www.angelfire.com/creep/spbmusic and then click on it.... its at the bottom - thats odd.... works for me, but of course, angelfire is really weird.

ngng · Post by **ngng** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 8:43 pm

dont believe angelfire allows direct linking

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 8:47 pm

so no one can get it? As you can see, I have much to learn....

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:31 pm

is it working for anyone?? - let me know. Thanks!

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:35 pm

Typical bandwidth problem at angelfire , its temporary unavailable

By the way , Oasis ownz

taylordb · Post by **taylordb** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:36 pm

Does not work for me either

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:47 pm

wow - that sucks - how do most people host their music then? Angelfire appears to me to suck. Any other suggestions? I'd love to get feedback.... Thanks for the help!

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Sun Dec 28, 2003 3:49 am

it's workin for me and i'm diggin it champ...couple spots your voice seems to have trouble staying that high...can always change key if you have to, but very solid

isaac · Post by **isaac** » Sun Dec 28, 2003 9:48 am

project man. your voice is way way way way way too timid and it sounds like a mouse is trying to sing this song.

don't mean to be harsh, but it's just way too damn soft. i'm sure your voice could be a thousand times better if you just projected. that's why you're having trouble hitting those high notes. there's less air used on high notes (you should never force them) so with your minimal amount of air that you're using now it becomes barely anything once you get to those high notes, and you may be losing your breath earlier than you normally would if you were just talking.

the playing was pretty solid...i think you should try to give it a fuller sound because you're playing solo.

work on your voice...i had the same problem with projection (i still do), and it takes time, but it gets better with practice.

6/10 chopsticks.

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sun Dec 28, 2003 1:11 pm

wow, thanks for the advice...

I appreciate it....

sbhanot · Post by **sbhanot** » Sun Dec 28, 2003 1:52 pm

i listened to it again - i tried to make the song a bit quieter b/c i was sick, but yeah, i need some work on taking in air - I know I was trying to make the song a bit sadder and softer, but I need to work on diaphragm breathing. Thanks for the comments, they're really really helpful, I'd appreciate any more if anyone has any thoughts!

Jc · Post by Jc » Sat Feb 21, 2004 7:18 am

I have no idea what your voice sounds like, you were whispering more than singing. Rhythm seems on though. As already stated, let's here your voice!

Reckless · Post by **Reckless** » Sat Feb 21, 2004 6:57 pm

i agree, too soft to be a wonderwall.