I always sucked in italian, had only one year in school. so this is my first attempt to do a song in italian. Since I want to get that language down too, I thought it might help to sing in it... was a lot of fun to do.
ok tell me what you think, although you might not understand much
Very great the first time i heard it , the second time was even better , and the 3rd time i thought i was going to learn italian except i didn't understand shit But it sounds very good
your rhythm is rock-solid from the start. and your lyrics sound solid, no tripping over your words (which typically happens to me when i sing in german or some language that isnt my orriginal language).
be careful with this song it sounds like restaurant / elevator music i think you could get out of that with some more variation in your voice, or with more variation on guitar... the pick scratching / high-end notes that almost every chord has really makes the song sound very dry...
but besides the dryness the song is ultra solid... the reason the dryness is annoying is becuase everything else is so good =)
...with all the nice italian singers, you had to draw JOVANOTTI???!!!!
Anyway, i think that the original song is a real shit (i'm italian, unfortunately i know this song!)...but your work is very very nice...Congratulations!!!!
Well...even if i don't like them, i reccomend you to play something of "Le Vibrazioni"...they're very skilled...but i think you should have to use an electrical guitar...
You can also try with something of "Elisa"...she often sings in english...
There's also the other shit of "Eros Ramazzotti" with his last song "Un'emozione per sempre"...
If you want to play somethink difficult, i reccomend you to try with "Alex Britti"...
Make me know your choice!!!!
But it sounds very good 