hey fellow musicians,
I just posted a few tunes. so please check them out and post me a critique of what yall think.
its fixed! try this...http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 20&alid=-1
Cheers,
J.T.
please give these originals a listen
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please give these originals a listen
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Good job
Masquerade:
It has a dave matthews sorta sound, but folkier. A little bit of celtic in there, but just a little. I would love to hear some vocals or another guitar(or perhaps my little mando) anyways great stuff. I really really love great instrumentals(unfortunately I might be one of the only ones)
Far gone:
Has a little more of a acoustic pop sound. By "pop" i mean a good well put together song, not like Nsync or britney or anything like that. Great chorus and the vocals are pretty good. I would like to jam to this.
what are you using for recording?
Some of my music:
http://tomcadaret.iuma.com

Masquerade:
It has a dave matthews sorta sound, but folkier. A little bit of celtic in there, but just a little. I would love to hear some vocals or another guitar(or perhaps my little mando) anyways great stuff. I really really love great instrumentals(unfortunately I might be one of the only ones)
Far gone:
Has a little more of a acoustic pop sound. By "pop" i mean a good well put together song, not like Nsync or britney or anything like that. Great chorus and the vocals are pretty good. I would like to jam to this.
what are you using for recording?
Some of my music:
http://tomcadaret.iuma.com
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excellent work
masquerade- definitely needs vocals, in my opinion
its a good foundation for a great song, but it needs something more to keep it interesting i think
add a lead part and vocals and it will sound even better!
far gone- u have a good ear resulting in a good voice
im trying to compare it to someones but i cant remember
very nice
again, a lead track would be good if youre able to, but both of these songs are very good and you have real potential
masquerade- definitely needs vocals, in my opinion
its a good foundation for a great song, but it needs something more to keep it interesting i think
add a lead part and vocals and it will sound even better!
far gone- u have a good ear resulting in a good voice
im trying to compare it to someones but i cant remember
very nice
again, a lead track would be good if youre able to, but both of these songs are very good and you have real potential
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