Seek up cover.. (new member)
Seek up cover.. (new member)
This is a version of Seek Up I recorded..not the exact chords...I "dumbed" them down for a fuller sound. Tell me what you think, no matter what it is. Thanks
(There are a few screw ups,...was too lazy to re-record)
http://www.angelfire.com/wv2/number7/seek_upce.mp3
(There are a few screw ups,...was too lazy to re-record)
http://www.angelfire.com/wv2/number7/seek_upce.mp3
the guitar playing sounded good for the most part
the vocals were decent at first, but it sounded like your voice got really really tired at the end.
some key problems especially around 4:30 or so.
my recommendation would be to try to relax your throat when you sing. try to make the sound come from your lungs, not your throat and mouth (if you can imagine that)
you seem like you have a lot of potential, and it was pretty good to start off, but it started going downhill when you got tired.
i hope that helps. thanks for posting, keep them coming.
and Welcome to the boards
the vocals were decent at first, but it sounded like your voice got really really tired at the end.
some key problems especially around 4:30 or so.
my recommendation would be to try to relax your throat when you sing. try to make the sound come from your lungs, not your throat and mouth (if you can imagine that)
you seem like you have a lot of potential, and it was pretty good to start off, but it started going downhill when you got tired.
i hope that helps. thanks for posting, keep them coming.
and Welcome to the boards
-Andrew
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maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
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chosta wrote:penis's are the the devil amirite
Was that a joke?DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
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what do you think he got it from? the man's been smoking for a long time.MWR wrote:Was that a joke?DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
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thanksDJR07 wrote:actually go to the site, and then click on it, i had to do it that wayfortyoneantz wrote:bad link

::listening..will come back with comments::
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chosta wrote:penis's are the the devil amirite
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Dave's voice isn't from that mostly, in my opinion. I believe it's just from years and years of performing shows..dmbguitar718 wrote:what do you think he got it from? the man's been smoking for a long time.MWR wrote:Was that a joke?DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
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the guitar is pretty good...but the voice is weak. you're very out of key in some places and it sounds sort of like kermit the frog. i'm not saying this to be mean, i'm just pointing it out. work on your voice..maybe some lessons? but keep up the good work with the guitar! 

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chosta wrote:penis's are the the devil amirite
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yeah dave's voice has "matured" or even say "aged" if you want over the years, but no one else sounds like him, and one big reason why is the drugs, especially the harder stuff that he probably doesn't do anymoreDMBFan63 wrote:dmbguitar718 wrote:what do you think he got it from? the man's been smoking for a long time.MWR wrote:Was that a joke?DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
Dave's voice isn't from that mostly, in my opinion. I believe it's just from years and years of performing shows..
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