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Seek up cover.. (new member)

Unread post by mofo2323 » Fri May 07, 2004 3:20 am

This is a version of Seek Up I recorded..not the exact chords...I "dumbed" them down for a fuller sound. Tell me what you think, no matter what it is. Thanks
(There are a few screw ups,...was too lazy to re-record)

http://www.angelfire.com/wv2/number7/seek_upce.mp3

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Unread post by gravesRR7 » Fri May 07, 2004 12:13 pm

the guitar playing sounded good for the most part
the vocals were decent at first, but it sounded like your voice got really really tired at the end.
some key problems especially around 4:30 or so.

my recommendation would be to try to relax your throat when you sing. try to make the sound come from your lungs, not your throat and mouth (if you can imagine that)

you seem like you have a lot of potential, and it was pretty good to start off, but it started going downhill when you got tired.

i hope that helps. thanks for posting, keep them coming.
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Unread post by DJR » Fri May 07, 2004 12:28 pm

maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
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Unread post by whatshername » Fri May 07, 2004 12:56 pm

bad link
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Unread post by DJR » Fri May 07, 2004 1:57 pm

fortyoneantz wrote:bad link
actually go to the site, and then click on it, i had to do it that way

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Unread post by MWR » Fri May 07, 2004 2:06 pm

DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
Was that a joke?

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri May 07, 2004 2:31 pm

MWR wrote:
DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
Was that a joke?
what do you think he got it from? the man's been smoking for a long time.
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Fri May 07, 2004 10:20 pm

It seems like staying on pitch is something you could work on. The whole thing is a bit flat or sharp.

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Unread post by whatshername » Sat May 08, 2004 12:32 pm

DJR07 wrote:
fortyoneantz wrote:bad link
actually go to the site, and then click on it, i had to do it that way
thanks :D

::listening..will come back with comments::
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sat May 08, 2004 5:10 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
MWR wrote:
DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
Was that a joke?
what do you think he got it from? the man's been smoking for a long time.
Dave's voice isn't from that mostly, in my opinion. I believe it's just from years and years of performing shows..
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Unread post by whatshername » Sat May 08, 2004 5:28 pm

the guitar is pretty good...but the voice is weak. you're very out of key in some places and it sounds sort of like kermit the frog. i'm not saying this to be mean, i'm just pointing it out. work on your voice..maybe some lessons? but keep up the good work with the guitar! :D
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Unread post by DJR » Sat May 08, 2004 10:13 pm

DMBFan63 wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
MWR wrote:
DJR07 wrote:maybe this isn't what you were goin for, but i think you were trying to sound like dave, and we all do it sometimes by mistake, but its probably not the best thing to do for your voice, his got that way cause of all the drugs and what not
guitar sounded really solid, but i think you were kinda off with your voice, try singing along with a track of dave doin it, and try and hit his pitches, or work with a tuner, that helps too
welcome to the boards!
Was that a joke?
what do you think he got it from? the man's been smoking for a long time.


Dave's voice isn't from that mostly, in my opinion. I believe it's just from years and years of performing shows..
yeah dave's voice has "matured" or even say "aged" if you want over the years, but no one else sounds like him, and one big reason why is the drugs, especially the harder stuff that he probably doesn't do anymore

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Unread post by adamondo » Tue May 11, 2004 3:05 pm

harder stuff? ..........

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Tue May 11, 2004 3:36 pm

adamondo wrote:harder stuff? ..........
Yes, such as dragons, as trippin' billies says, he smoked. Dragons from what i've read here on the boards is weed laced with acid.. so yeah, dave has done a lot of drugs
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Unread post by adamondo » Tue May 11, 2004 7:46 pm

so because he's done shrooms weed and dragons he's done a lot of drugs?

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