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thanks for listening T1nM4n!

and the rest of you : for shaaaame! )

is there anyone else out there willing to give an opinion on this song ?
I'd really appreciate it, thanks!

hello, people!

here's a reworked version of one of my older songs ... it's got a kind of RnB groove to it, so beware

TIA for listening!

http://users.pandora.be/Luyckx/Tricks%2 ... 20Tori.mp3

anyone willing to comment some more ? I would really appreciate the feedback.

TIA!

the way you sing them ... the rhythm, the intensity ... I'd take it down a notch there and then let it build up again towards the end

yeah, it sounds much nicer now! ... but I would adjust the balance in the chorus ... because now you've put the leadvocals way in the back (and to the right) and the backings in the left front ... it should be the other way around, in my opinion ... or at least at the same level.

But this is still ...

heya!

cool song! You should work this one out a bit. As far as the vocals go, I won't comment too much, because you know they need work. Did you record them together with the guitar ? If so, I'd suggest to split them, and record the vocals over the guitar, because you seem rushed ... seems like you ...

hello all, thanks for the comments

I've had numerous comments on the drums, so I'm planning on replacing them with acoustic drums ... we'll see where that takes the song ... I kind of like the creepy atmosphere they create right now ...

thanks for listening, you all, and I'll try to post some more ...

hey, Kevin!

I like the song ... as said above, the lyrics are very nice and I like the way you build it up ... although I would take it up an extra notch in the last part after the "you don't wanna be like me" piece.

You've got a good voice, but if I may make a suggestion, I would try and sing it ...

hullow!

I'm kind of brandspankingnew here and it seems like you guys are a fun lot to hang out with ... online that is :)

and is there any better way to introduce yourself than posting an mp3 of your own work ?
Here's a link to it :

http://users.pandora.be/Luyckx/Tricks%20For%20Agnes%20 ...

I finally took the time to register so I could comment on this collaborationthingy ... I like it alot ... you can see where the guitarline came from, it's véry DMB, but the vocal line reminded me alot of Ryan Adams .. which is, in my book, a wonderfull compliment to get :)

I would like to try ...