Improv Jam/Song type thing (NO VOCALS)

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Mon Feb 09, 2004 1:11 am

http://www.geocities.com/bigspeen36/originaldemo.mp3
100% Improv'd. First original. I want some people's opinions on what they think is good/bad, etc.
HERE is another link:
http://www.angelfire.com/band2/bigspeen3436/index.html
click on original demo

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Mon Feb 09, 2004 1:20 am

it's a cool little ditty...it needs vocals or lead and i like how it changes mood pretty hard about a minute in

Matty Boom · Post by **Matty Boom** » Tue Feb 10, 2004 8:49 pm

bump to the top for speeny

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Tue Feb 10, 2004 10:30 pm

lot rhythm problems on that one, your meter changes pretty much the entire time. thats about it.

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Tue Feb 10, 2004 10:42 pm

fatjack wrote:lot rhythm problems on that one, your meter changes pretty much the entire time. thats about it.

good point, what do u think of it as a song though? Would you change anything besides just making the rhythm smoother?

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Tue Feb 10, 2004 10:45 pm

BigSpeen3436 wrote:
fatjack wrote:lot rhythm problems on that one, your meter changes pretty much the entire time. thats about it.
good point, what do u think of it as a song though? Would you change anything besides just making the rhythm smoother?

its extremely repetitive, you dont have any noticable changes that would separate sections. you need more drastic changes to diferrentiate between sections

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Tue Feb 10, 2004 11:01 pm

fatjack wrote:
BigSpeen3436 wrote:
fatjack wrote:lot rhythm problems on that one, your meter changes pretty much the entire time. thats about it.
good point, what do u think of it as a song though? Would you change anything besides just making the rhythm smoother?
its extremely repetitive, you dont have any noticable changes that would separate sections. you need more drastic changes to diferrentiate between sections

Sweet! Thanks a bunch Josh for the help

You nice man

dmb_tatertot · Post by **dmb_tatertot** » Thu Feb 12, 2004 1:08 am

Hey, i enjoyed it but felt like it was lacking some differentiating between sections. The lack of change introduces repetition. The tempo is also all over the place. Overall though, i enjoyed. Keep it up.

Chris

fatjack · Post by **fatjack** » Thu Feb 12, 2004 5:08 pm

dmb_tatertot wrote:Hey, i enjoyed it but felt like it was lacking some differentiating between sections. The lack of change introduces repetition. The tempo is also all over the place. Overall though, i enjoyed. Keep it up.

Chris

looks familiar....

DT · Post by DT » Thu Feb 12, 2004 5:26 pm

cool progressions, cant say anythign about it that hasnt already been said... nice work bro

Speenis · Post by **Speenis** » Fri Feb 13, 2004 8:57 pm

thanks for the replies guys, I'm still not sure what i'm gonna do with it yet but you'll see me repost a finished product in a few weeks