Original Song

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 1:34 am

The song's called Hypnotized.

Since I've recorded it, I've taken out the last verse and done a little work to shorten it. But overall, I'd love to hear what you guys think

http://www.myspace.com/mitchmeadows
song = Hypnotized

jaroben · Post by **jaroben** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 3:18 am

it's not working for me... damnit i want to hear it.

jaroben · Post by **jaroben** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 4:19 am

ok it's working.... i'm on 56 so it takes a little.

Damn dude.. I can't really find a bad thing about your song. If I had to .. the guitar was basic, but the progression was really good.. fit your lyrics really well. Can't find anything wrong with your voice.

Awesome song

eliot1171 · Post by **eliot1171** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 11:02 am

Sounds good. It has a dark feel to it. Turn the vocals up a bit. The vocals are a little hard to understand, they are muffled or just too quiet, but I like the song.

PS How many songs does myspace host?

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:42 pm

you can only put 4 up at a time. it's limited but it's more than enough for what i'm trying to do. cool and easy set up though and that's what i like cause i'm computer stupid.

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 4:10 pm

crank up the vocals and this is terriffic. everything else about it is amazing. good work mitch. keep postin

freshead16 · Post by **freshead16** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 4:38 pm

sounds good man. i like the chord pregression a lot. also was curious how you made your myspace so cool looking. I tried that thing

freshead16 · Post by **freshead16** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 4:39 pm

sounds good man. i like the chord pregression a lot. also was curious how you made your myspace so cool looking?

Appfro · Post by **Appfro** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 4:43 pm

http://www.dmbtabs.com/boards/viewtopic.php?t=21841

put what you wnat in, it'll give you the code. and then you take that code and enter it in one of the profile questions like "Hobbies" or "Heros" or whatever.

Trippin Hillbilly · Post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Mon May 02, 2005 5:10 pm

Blanket dog!!

awesome awesome song apps.. the chorus is killer. Couple of things i'd change, I noticed that you made the first chorus just instrumental. I'd probably go right into it and sing the chorus then cause this song is waaaaaaaaaaay too long. Think you need to compress it a bit.
I seem to say this everytime I crit one of your songs.

You've got a really nice link from the chorus back to the verse. I like it alot. So yeah, sing that first chorus and shorten the song. Everything else awesome, great work apps.