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tomorrow morning -- jack johnson

Unread post by Matty Boom » Mon May 31, 2004 12:45 pm

http://www.angelfire.com/mech/mattyboom ... orning.mp3

it's been a while since i put up anything in here, but i think this one is alright

here's the words --


well that's alright
and that's alright
2000 miles we stood
and that's alright

and that's alright
if that's alright
i'll see you in the morning
if that's alright

what would you do if i wrote you a song
would you give me some lovin when i get home
would you be mad if i had a hard time
gettin a hold of you you know i try all the time

and i think that
you don't know anybody that could be
so bad
but if you did you'd be wonderin where
i'm at
well i'll be home when tomorrow morning comes


what would you do if i sang you this song
the connection is bad but that's only the phone
when my words kiss your ear, i'll be right there
the message is long, but this is your song


and i think that
you don't know anybody that could be
so bad
but if you did you'd be wonderin where
i'm at
well i'll be home when tomorrow morning

and that's alright
i'll be home when tomorrow morning
and that's alright
i'll be home when tomorrow morning comes



feedback would be appreciated, thanks
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon May 31, 2004 1:21 pm

Just to let you know, this isn't Jack's song.

The intro was alright. You were a little off key, and it seemed as if you were having trouble keeping a steady beat.

The rest of the song, you seemed to have trouble staying in key. I liked the solos though, pretty chill. :)

Mainly, the problem with this was your voice. Keep singing though, you can only go in one direction. :)

Keep it up.
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Mon May 31, 2004 1:40 pm

heh, my voice is the problem with everything i play :)

but, i just do one take and take the with the bad

but yea, i can't sing, but i'm working toward getting better
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon May 31, 2004 1:51 pm

Matty Boom wrote:heh, my voice is the problem with everything i play :)

but, i just do one take and take the with the bad

but yea, i can't sing, but i'm working toward getting better
i know exactly how you feel. I always have trouble singing.
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Mon May 31, 2004 1:58 pm

well, it really doesn't bother me...i just don't try and get too extravagent with any songs, the simpler the songs, the better my inabilities are masked :)
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Unread post by Easy E » Sat Aug 14, 2004 12:25 am

dmbguitar718 wrote:Just to let you know, this isn't Jack's song.

The intro was alright. You were a little off key, and it seemed as if you were having trouble keeping a steady beat.

The rest of the song, you seemed to have trouble staying in key. I liked the solos though, pretty chill. :)

Mainly, the problem with this was your voice. Keep singing though, you can only go in one direction. :)

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat Aug 14, 2004 9:01 am

Not sure. I was listening to the CD in my living room, and my Dad walked in and started singing along with all the lyrics. I was like...? He said it's a an old song.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat Aug 14, 2004 9:05 am

Actually, I just googled it, and it seems like I'm lying. :lol: I'm still wondering how my dad could sing along with it though.
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sat Aug 14, 2004 9:08 am

dmbguitar718 wrote:Actually, I just googled it, and it seems like I'm lying. :lol: I'm still wondering how my dad could sing along with it though.
that's baffled me forever!
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Unread post by rand » Tue Aug 17, 2004 2:23 am

dmbguitar718 wrote:Just to let you know, this isn't Jack's song.
It isnt? Who's is it? I'm not doubting you...I just thought it was an original of his.

edit> bleh....note to self: read thread.

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Unread post by dustin » Tue Aug 17, 2004 8:53 pm

its mos def a jack johnson song.


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Unread post by zeppelin41 » Wed Aug 18, 2004 8:54 pm

yep

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