Song I'm workin on

Kahn · Post by **Kahn** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:48 pm

Speenis wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
wrong again!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Is_There_A ... t_There%3F

Ya dumbass!

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:51 pm

Speenis wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
wrong again!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Is_There_A ... t_There%3F

that doesnt change the fact that pink floyd is one of the worst bands ever oh yea, and they suck.

hofdaddy · Post by **hofdaddy** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:51 pm

wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
No, I honestly haven't listen to them in years.
yea hof, why dont you back off and stop accusing people of shit!
step away from the keyboard and give your dick beaters a rest before they get you into trouble Bobby.
no way, this guy comes in here, with something original and different and you compare him to one of the shittiest bands ever. you step away!

you're right. I apologize. I think he should include the lyrics from Little Miss Muffett in his song though

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:52 pm

hofdaddy wrote:
wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
No, I honestly haven't listen to them in years.
yea hof, why dont you back off and stop accusing people of shit!
step away from the keyboard and give your dick beaters a rest before they get you into trouble Bobby.
no way, this guy comes in here, with something original and different and you compare him to one of the shittiest bands ever. you step away!
you're right. I apologize. I think he should include the lyrics from Little Miss Muffett in his song though

interesting, but its his song, so its up to him

Kahn · Post by **Kahn** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:58 pm

mbent4679 · Post by **mbent4679** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 4:33 pm

Kahn wrote:
Speenis wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
wrong again!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Is_There_A ... t_There%3F
Ya dumbass!

Sorry look at the lyrics for comfortably numb the line is is there anybody in there. Like i said I haven't listen to pink floyd in years got sick of them.

mbent4679 · Post by **mbent4679** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 4:39 pm

Whatever, Thnx for the round and round tip grvn, and the vocal double should work well for the chorus buffullo I'm gunna work on it. If there's anybody else who wants to comment i'm more than happoy to hear.

Kahn · Post by **Kahn** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 5:22 pm

mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:
Speenis wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
wrong again!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Is_There_A ... t_There%3F
Ya dumbass!
Sorry look at the lyrics for comfortably numb the line is is there anybody in there. Like i said I haven't listen to pink floyd in years got sick of them.

I was just kidding man

a1075dd63aa12 · Post by **a1075dd63aa12** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 11:03 pm

mbent4679 wrote:Whatever, Thnx for the round and round tip grvn, and the vocal double should work well for the chorus buffullo I'm gunna work on it. If there's anybody else who wants to comment i'm more than happoy to hear.

you can call me wkpg

mbent4679 · Post by **mbent4679** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 11:06 pm

lyrics101 · Post by **lyrics101** » Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:23 pm

First of all, I love Pink Floyd.

Second of all (and I'd go into more detail if my internet wasn't a fuck-up -- I understand I'm way behind on this post), who gives a shit if a line was used before by ANY band? The only question you should be asking yourself is, "How well does it work in the context I intend to use it in?"

As Lee Strasberg told his actors at the Actors Studio (y'know; Brando, James Dean, Liam Neeson, Al Pacino, De Niro, and a million others?), "We only criticize people for stealing ideas when they steal something not worth stealing."

hofdaddy · Post by **hofdaddy** » Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:30 pm

shut up douche. he's stealing lyrics like you steal from Nirvana

lyrics101 · Post by **lyrics101** » Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:40 pm

hofdaddy wrote:shut up douche. he's stealing lyrics like you steal from Nirvana

.... he said, and then quietly returned to writing Dave Matthews b-sides.

hofdaddy · Post by **hofdaddy** » Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:49 pm

lyrics101 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:shut up douche. he's stealing lyrics like you steal from Nirvana
.... he said, and then quietly returned to writing Dave Matthews b-sides.

yeah. cause I love DMB, you fucking helmet wearer

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:59 am

i actually think the song has some potential.

however, the lyrics, any and all plagarism aside, are pretty horrible. I have no clue what the hell you are trying to say. Before you whip out your nursery rhymes to give your songs a "folksey" feel, you sure as hell better have a message first. for extra points they should be related.