An instrumental....to be ripped with constructive criticism

JacknCoke · Post by **JacknCoke** » Sat Dec 06, 2003 5:28 pm

just another little instrumental I did...If it really bums you out, just lay it down heavy at me..

http://home.comcast.net/~edwardcw/Into_The_Storm.wma

DustyDave · Post by **DustyDave** » Sat Dec 06, 2003 5:34 pm

At 0:08 it seems to get a little too busy , nice rhytm as well as progression , i won't tear this tune apart with heavy critism on you because it simply ain't needed , its a very lovely tune , just watch out that it won't get too busy , then you'll be just fine