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Post by DMBFan63 »

don't think this is gonna get done before halloween.. you only have a little bit o' time left
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I like your vocals man, A+!
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sounds good u guys
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Anyone listening, its halloween! Well it was, but you know what I mean!
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Well I got 90mb of traffic since halloween, so chances are somebody besides recentlytippin also heard it.
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Post by DMBFan63 »

it sounds wicked, but i suggest you clean up your vocal tracks, i can hear exactly where they come in and fade out, cause it gets a bit static...y
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Post by MWR »

Not bad at all. You really hit that "run away" part so kudos there. It seemed when you belted out the notes they actually sonuded better. Only suggestion would be to put that power into the verses. You don't need to be screaming everything just add more power/presence. The guitar was pretty much right on not much to critique there. I'm no bass player but there were some good licks in there. The production had some nifty tricks to it too. Great job.
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