My roommates weren't home when I got home so I figured I'd do something real quick....I didn't play through the entire song because I got a semi-important phonecall in the middle of the song.
Guitar work seems solid. voice should be more discernable though.
I know you may not have the equipment to record it a bit more professinally. that doesn't matter. But at least make sure it's decent work you post. People will be more inclined to check your stuff.
You kinda sound like Elvis. That's not really a bad thing but your vibrato is sort of goat-like. You have a lot of things going wrong with the vocals but there's some good potential there. Keep at it.
i agree that my vocals are terrible. are there any kind of exercises that would help me to sing better? i have never been able to grasp the concept of singing from my diaphragm at all.