An Original - It's Alright To Be Afraid

Too Step · Post by **Too Step** » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:47 pm

I just finished this, after some criticism...

http://www.soundclick.com/chrisoliver

Chris

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:48 pm

Why am i being reminded of a DMB song? pretty good tho. are you gonna make this instrumental? no vocal?

Too Step · Post by **Too Step** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:19 am

Thanks, Which DM song does it remind you of?

I'm gonna keep it with vocals i think i can't write instrumentals.

Thanks for the feedback

Chris

deceptivehero · Post by **deceptivehero** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 1:29 pm

I thought it was good but it didn't really make me think of a Dave song, which is a good or bad thing depending upon what you wanted.

Tranman66 · Post by **Tranman66** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 2:59 pm

omg, i listened to it again, i swear its not the same. What the heck did i listen to last time. Anyway, this one def doesn't sound like a dave song. My apology.

Your voice is high. Do you like singing voice high? Probably sound better high in your opinion right? Well, I think you'll get more range by going a little lower.

I like to see the song gets a little faster.

Slow and steady. Wellplayed tho.

Keep posting!

mangold · Post by **mangold** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 4:02 pm

na bad ma man... na bad. your voice is good but very high. i would turn up the intrumental tho. keep posting

Too Step · Post by **Too Step** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:19 pm

Thanks folks, i really didn't realise i was singing that high until i just listened back

Thanks i appreciate the feedback