Lie In Our Graves Jam Section

billywestom · Post by **billywestom** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 2:53 am

I did this a while ago as part of my full cover, but the vocals were just terrible. I was off-key the entire song. So I cut out the jam part here so you wouldn't have to go through the whole agony. I did a bunch of solos and stuff. Please tell me what you think, peace.

hd28v · Post by **hd28v** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 6:30 am

Great stuff. I truly enjoyed it, especially around 2:32. Good balance overall of tempo, fast and then gradually slowing down.

billywestom · Post by **billywestom** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 12:26 pm

thanks

jsgksu · Post by **jsgksu** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 1:25 pm

Your site has been down everytime I try to listen, it says its down for 2 hours right now, let me know when its workin.

billywestom · Post by **billywestom** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 1:54 pm

jsgksu wrote:Your site has been down everytime I try to listen, it says its down for 2 hours right now, let me know when its workin.

ok, sorry about that

firedancer86 · Post by **firedancer86** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 3:36 pm

Awesome dtuff man!!!
I love to hear Tim like stuff and I love that jam...there will be a suprise when I get my Taylor

Be on the lookout in the next month

8)

billywestom · Post by **billywestom** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 3:37 pm

firedancer86 wrote:Awesome dtuff man!!!
I love to hear Tim like stuff and I love that jam...there will be a suprise when I get my Taylor Be on the lookout in the next month 8)

cool, cant wait

billywestom · Post by **billywestom** » Mon Apr 28, 2003 11:19 pm

jsgksu wrote:Your site has been down everytime I try to listen, it says its down for 2 hours right now, let me know when its workin.

site is working now, but who knows when you read this if it will still be going

DuMB · Post by **DuMB** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 11:51 am

was this improv'ed? if so, and this your first playing, then good job! i thought it was interesting (i.e. not a direct copy of dave and tim).

if this was not on the fly, then, i guess i'd recommend trying to keep in time a little better with the other guitar because there are some times when the extra notes are distracting and seem unnecessary.

i particularly liked the beginning (the interesting note choices). is that counter-harmony? (okay, i'm showing off my complete ignorance of music terminology.)

overall, especially near the middle and end, a lot of the solo stuff sounds timid, and i think that throws off some of the naturalness that really makes this song great (one of my favorites of all time!).

also, maybe some double-stops or bends/slides would help break the monotony of simply sticking to major scale single notes.

i hope this was helpful. good job. i'm always impressed at people's courage to post their work for criticism.

billywestom · Post by **billywestom** » Tue Apr 29, 2003 12:57 pm

DuMB wrote:was this improv'ed? if so, and this your first playing, then good job! i thought it was interesting (i.e. not a direct copy of dave and tim).

if this was not on the fly, then, i guess i'd recommend trying to keep in time a little better with the other guitar because there are some times when the extra notes are distracting and seem unnecessary.

i particularly liked the beginning (the interesting note choices). is that counter-harmony? (okay, i'm showing off my complete ignorance of music terminology.)

overall, especially near the middle and end, a lot of the solo stuff sounds timid, and i think that throws off some of the naturalness that really makes this song great (one of my favorites of all time!).

also, maybe some double-stops or bends/slides would help break the monotony of simply sticking to major scale single notes.

i hope this was helpful. good job. i'm always impressed at people's courage to post their work for criticism.

thanks for the reply. i guess i wouldnt call this "improv" i recorded it in a few different sections (i.e. the tremolo picking). i practiced the notes and memorized which ones fit for the key of the song. i have no clue as to what key really means, i just play by ear. it isnt hard to tell which notes fit during a solo and which ones dont. im not sure what you mean by counter harmony. i also dont really know what you mean by timid and it being natural. im sure if i were smarter this reply would have helped me out a lot. thanks