Makes Me Smile - 1st original

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ludes454
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Makes Me Smile - 1st original

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Hey everyone, this is basically my second post here, i did a horible rendition of tripping billies but other than that this is my first.

I just got cool edit pro so while messing around i came up with this little instrumental. Some of it is a little off, and there's the AIM door opening noise on there. But tell me what you think - critisize away

http://www.angelfire.com/moon2/funkybug/

Then just click on Makes Me Smile
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i like this, it has a real uppety feel...needs more AIM effects though :)
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Post by PlayLikeDave »

Matty Boom wrote:i like this, it has a real uppety feel...needs more AIM effects though :)
LOL haahahhahha more AIM effects rock!!!

werd that was great Matty...aahh...But the song was really good. Were there 2 guitar parts or am I mistaken? The rhythm was quite different and catchy.

Well done

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Post by ludes454 »

It was 4 different tracks, the rhythm, the melody, that lead higher up on the neck in the middle of the song, and then just me tapping on the body of my guitar.

I'm excited about this because i think with some refining and more work i could turn it into something cool and ya, i'm trying to take music to a new place with those AIM effects - think it'll catch on?? :)

Thanks for the feedback, any recommendations or ideas for improvement?
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My only suggestion is spend some $ and get better recording stuff. Other than that, maybe add vocals.

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Post by Matty Boom »

maybe just straight up more computer effects dude...'you've got mail' would obviously fit in anywhere in that song
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Post by DustyDave »

Nice beat , reminds me of summer tunes :)

And yeah more AIM sounds are needed :lol:
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