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instrumental- give it a listen

Unread post by indomitableyam » Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:44 pm

This is a recording I'm working on...the end isn't finished so ignore it, but the song is basically finished. Feel free to criticize- haven't had anyone listen to this one yet. Let me know what you think!
http://download.yousendit.com/E70B0AD875080453
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Unread post by indomitableyam » Sun Sep 23, 2007 4:14 pm

anybody? any comments would be appreciated
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:41 pm

I like it. It sounds a bit like Stream because of some of the chord voicings but it sounds original.

The second guitar is cool and i like the percussive chops you add.

The delay stuff is well done, wow, how many hands do you have.

It ends rather ubruptly so work on that. I'm not sure how you would sing over this but you may just leave it as an instrumental. You are a good guitar player man, keep it up.
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Unread post by indomitableyam » Sun Sep 23, 2007 7:36 pm

thanks for the feedback! I have an ending written for the song/ it just goes back into the first riff and ends on a D chord, but I haven't recorded that portion yet due to mic problems. I can't sing a lick so I'm trying to write instrumentals that are interesting enough to listen to without vocals. again thanks for listening!
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