a song

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dmb_rulz
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a song

Unread post by dmb_rulz » Sun Mar 26, 2006 12:19 pm

This is a song I made. I sang kind of low and melow on purpose since I dont have much range in my voice. Anyway tell me what u think. :) :)


http://s55.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=27HD ... 0MJ14F7DGH
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J_Clark
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Unread post by J_Clark » Sun Mar 26, 2006 1:36 pm

It was alright. The musical parts did not fit well at all. You need to mix them better. By the way i think i remember hearing something similar, with the same lyrics but different music. maybe it was you? if it was another version, the other was much better.
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