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Unread post by cave_cricket » Fri Feb 14, 2003 2:20 pm

Vocals are really really bad in this. I tried to get some yells but had to control my volume because of living in an apartment building...they get pissed when I yell. Thus, my vocals went to shit.

But let me know if I have potential with this song or if I should give up trying.... :lol:

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Unread post by gravedigger » Fri Feb 14, 2003 2:21 pm

you're shit outta bandwidth, jiminy cavecricket!!

2 hours and it'll be back.
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Unread post by cave_cricket » Fri Feb 14, 2003 2:23 pm

gravedigger wrote:you're shit outta bandwidth, jiminy cavecricket!!

2 hours and it'll be back.
damn..must be the other site with TB on it....bastards! Thank for looking though...though I'm not looking for to your critique (cuz they suck :lol: )

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Unread post by IronMike778 » Fri Feb 14, 2003 4:32 pm

I liked it, Cave.....nice job. This was the one song that jumped out at me when Everyday came out and its still one of my favorites. Your guitar work was very smooth and the tempo was right on. Good job.
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Sat Feb 15, 2003 11:29 am

great guitar work :shock:

ha...im not poking any fun (dave does it like that too), but it kinda sounds like a stoned indian at the beginning (seriously, im really not poking any fun :wink: ) HEHE...the cursing ON YOUR KNEES part is funny as anything :roll: :lol:

still say that you are trying to be...

INCUBUS + DAVE MATTHEWS = CAVE CRICKET... :lol:

AWSOME GUITAR, and the vocals sound decent as well :wink:
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Unread post by cave_cricket » Sat Feb 15, 2003 11:31 am

firedancer86 wrote:great guitar work :shock:

ha...im not poking any fun (dave does it like that too), but it kinda sounds like a stoned indian at the beginning (seriously, im really not poking any fun :wink: )

still say that you are trying to be...

INCUBUS + DAVE MATTHEWS = CAVE CRICKET... :lol:

AWSOME GUITAR, and the vocals sound decent as well :wink:
I can't say that I'm TRYING to be that....it just comes out that way....besides...if you mix the two you get something different o that makes something new which is original.... :lol:

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Sat Feb 15, 2003 11:34 am

Oh, I'm sorry...I didn't mean you really TRY to sound like them...don't take it that way...Just be yourself, and if this is it, more power to ya' :wink:
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