Original Composition

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Jer1400
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Original Composition

Unread post by Jer1400 » Sun May 16, 2004 2:11 pm

I started working on a piece I had been planning for about 6 hours yesterday on my guitar at 1:30 this morning. I worked all night and at around 10:00 I finished it. Right now I don't have a piano, or an adaptor I need. This is a midi. When I record it, the lead guitar will be on my electric hollowbody (thanks again for showing me the adaptor, Pat) because my acoustic is not a cut out, and it would be quite difficult to sound some of the higher scales efficiently.

Anyway, here it is:

http://www.flatface.net/~jer1400/Number14.mid

Comments and critiques, please. This is my best work to date and I'm quite proud, to be frank. I hope you enjoy listening as much as I did composing. :)

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Bah, it was thinking the '#' was an anchor. Use the updated link now (Number14.mid).

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun May 16, 2004 4:08 pm

It's hard to judge a song by listening to a midi, but the first thing that came to mind was Crocodile Rock. The progression is a commonly used one, and gets a little boring without a change. The double-time part is different, but still not different enough to really catch my attention. Maybe if it's recorded with real instruments it'll stand out more. Good luck with it.

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