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well, i thought that all the parts were there for a nice dissonant (in a good way) piece, but i think the timing between the parts needs closer attention. even though the sounds seemed to go together in a unique way, sometimes they were out of synch, and that caused too much clashing to enjoy... and ...

was this improv'ed? if so, and this your first playing, then good job! i thought it was interesting (i.e. not a direct copy of dave and tim).

if this was not on the fly, then, i guess i'd recommend trying to keep in time a little better with the other guitar because there are some times when the ...

hi trippin,

mind you, i'm no expert, but... i've been downloading recordings and stuff from this site for a couple of weeks, and i really enjoyed your cover, quite possibly the most of all the ones i've heard.

these might sound basic, but i thought you did a great job of staying in your vocal ...